The Train Sex Ride
This story was written as a challenge to tell an erotic tale with the fewest words possible. I had it down to 618, but the minimum length for some sites is 750 words. I added some dialogue, a few adjectives and expanded some descriptions so I could post it on all the sites I submit stories on. Total word count is 951.
As I got on the train, my eyes met hers. There was an instant connection, and I knew that we would soon be naked and sweaty together. I could tell by the way her breathing changed that she knew it too.
A couple of hours later, I entered the dining car and saw her sitting alone. I boldly walked up to her table and sat down without asking. She looked at me with a wry smile on her face, and an invitation in her eyes.
"I'm Tom," I said, offering her my hand.
"Sue," she replied, as her hand slipped into mine.
We ate in silence. No words were needed. We both knew what was going to happen. After finishing our meal, I lead her to the sleeping car. When we reached my berth, I opened the door and let her enter first. She stepped through the door without hesitation. I followed, closing the door behind me.
Once we were alone, my arms wrapped around her waist from behind. I kissed her neck, and she tilted her head exposing more of it to me. My hands rested on her flat stomach, just below her warm soft breasts. I could feel the weight of them pressing into my arms. I cupped and squeezed one of the globes as my other hand grasped her skirt and dragged it up her legs, exposing her taut thighs.
She twisted her body around, pressing tightly against me and our lips met. Her breasts were crushed against me as my hands grasped her ass, lifting her several inches off the floor. Her long legs encircled my waist as I navigated us both to the bed. We landed on the thin mattress, our tongues intertwined.
She pulled her head back, showing me the hunger in her eyes. She began to unbutton my shirt, and I leaned back to give her room to undress me. She kissed my chest as I unzipped her dress, my hands exploring the exposed flesh. My clothes mixed with hers in a pile on the floor.
Between lipstick and the occasional nip, our lips left trails of little red marks, a map of where they’d been. She dropped to her knees, her eyes looking deep into mine. She grabbed the base of my cock and lowered her mouth over it. I groaned as she deep throated my shaft. Her mouth was better than any pussy I'd ever fucked. I lay back and closed my eyes, savoring her skill.
"Now, fuck me like a man," she demanded.
She screamed, "OH YES! Pound my ass!"
"Baby, you're the greatest," I told her.
"You're not so bad yourself," she replied.
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